My Head is a Maze – Poem

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Today’s blog is going to be a poem I have written called “My Head is a Maze”. I’m trying to learn different ways to write poems to help diversify my range. Here it is, I hope you enjoy!

My head sometimes feels like a neverending maze,

With corridors changing and turning  leaving my thoughts in a daze,

An exit never in sight despite trying all the available ways,

The mood quickly lowers in need of a raise,

Is this forever or is it just a phase?

My mind often wonders, conclusions it does draw,

Thoughts whizzing and whirring leaving my head quite sore,

A grip on reality can sometimes be hard to secure,

A sense of normalness often seems impossible to restore,

Is the reward for these phases worth the emotional seesaw?

When times get tough we can easily begin to isolate,

Our self-image in our minds we start to depreciate,

We usually undervalue the amount we have on our plate,

People start losing focus and cannot think straight,

It’s during these times that we need to accept help to help balance the weight.

My head sometimes feels like a neverending maze,

With corridors changing and turning  leaving my thoughts in a daze,

An exit never in sight despite trying all the available ways,

The mood quickly lowers in need of a raise,

Is this forever or is it just a phase?

Thank you for reading my new poem. What do you all think? Let me know in the comments or get in touch with me! Do we think doing poems on deeper topics is better than on lighter topics? Or should I try to balance it out? What do people think of comparing the mind to a maze?

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James Sweeney